From 57843a8ebd881e27f727b8facefde7c674cdcec9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Adam Piontek Date: Wed, 5 May 2021 15:01:52 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] edited poem --- priv/content/2021/05/2021-05-05_will-i-feel-the-wind.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/priv/content/2021/05/2021-05-05_will-i-feel-the-wind.md b/priv/content/2021/05/2021-05-05_will-i-feel-the-wind.md index 94bf919..a1af5cc 100644 --- a/priv/content/2021/05/2021-05-05_will-i-feel-the-wind.md +++ b/priv/content/2021/05/2021-05-05_will-i-feel-the-wind.md @@ -24,10 +24,10 @@ rough implement cracking feathers? Did I scrap their sick crumpled span somewhere lost? -Maybe I still feel something there. +Maybe I still feel something. I used to dream of flight, soaring free. -Dips and curls and swoops, -graceful landings, inviting horizons. +Dancing dips and flips, +graceful landings, long horizons. But who would love my winged majesty? They were more danger than delight.